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Wonderful work here. I do agree with the previous critique that the jaw could use a little adjusting. Perhaps drawing in the chin some ...

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Wonderful work here. I do agree with the previous critique that the jaw could use a little adjusting. Perhaps drawing in the chin some more and filling out the area over her teeth. Also the line between lower lip and fur is too hard. The top of the follicles should show some staggering to keep the lip from looking pasted on. Also missing is any hint of whiskers on the left side of her face to mirror those on the right. A few brow whiskers would help sell the overall look as well. I liked that you did not go totally animalistic on the eyes but enlarging the corneas a bit would not hurt.
Alehsar Lincoln
Too bad he isn't running this year. Being dead kind of disqualifies you.
A reference for a project I've been working on.

9" x 12" pencil on Bristol board.
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I went a bit detail crazy on this commission.

12" x 9" acrylic on canvas-board.
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David Bliss
Artist | Traditional Art
United States
Mostly a self taught artist. I have been drawing before I could read and selling my art since the late 1980's. Not enough to live on, but enough for the tax man to take notice.
My interests tend to revolve around world building to one extent or another. Science fiction. Space development. Dark rides. They all grab my attention.
My art is here for you to enjoy. If you do comments are always appreciated.
Please feel free to contact me if you are interested in a commission.
I probably will not be making it to any more conventions this year but have been adding things to my Etsy Shop.  Check out www.etsy.com/shop/Rivercoon
for an expanding list of both original artwork and prints for sale.

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Thank you for the watch : ))
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